Everyone looked at everyone else's work, in order to pick out the positives and negatives. This was good because we can then find out what people like, and what people think we should improve. After we have collected everyone's ideas, we can then move on and add these ideas to our page to finalise it. These are some of the positives of my page and things that I should improve on:
Positives:
-My page clearly shows what type of music I am doing
-The mist (behind the page numbers) is effective
-The background image is good as it promotes young bands
Improvements that need to be made:
-The logo at the bottom-right of the page needs to be moved up to the top-left, so it is more easily visible
-The shape behind '06!!' needs to be changed to, say, a badge, so it is more about rock and not as clipart looking
-The contents title needs to be improved
-I should include a font that looks like a stamp, to make it stand out and promote rock
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